ID Theft

Outline HELP!....(desperate need) Outline=Identity Theft?

Hello ..I need major desperate help on just fixing my outline adding or minusing things: I did an outline for my term paper : Identity theft : My teacher said that *I need a "problem" *Nothing addressed how it can be prevented *She wrote - Since ID tehft costs consumers and businesses billions, can it be prevented? Here is my outline: Tentative Outline I. What is Identity Theft a. Define Identity Theft b. Statistics of Identity Theft Occurrences c. Number of convictions II. Major Types of Internet Fraud a. Auction & Retail Fraud b. “Work At Home” Schemes c. Investment Schemes 1.Telemarketing d. Credit Card Schemes e. Identity Theft III. How Can Internet Fraud Be Avoided a. Avoid Giving Out Valuable Personal Information Online b. Don’t Judge By First Appearances c. Exercise Caution if Dealing with a Person or Agency who Disguises or Hides their Identity d. Be Careful of Advance Fee Agencies IV. Where Does Internet FraudGet Reported A. Agencies Dealing With Internet Fraud a. Department of Justice b. Internet Fraud Initiative 1) Federal Trade Commission 2) National Advocacy Center c. Internet Fraud Complaint Center d. FBI e. National White Collar Crime Center f. Securities and Exchange Commission g. Fraud.org h. National Consumers League I showed it to another teacher that i have and she said that it was ok ... BUT MY TEACHER not that teacher is ANAl and picky and a hard garder ... I want to fix my outline... she said it was too informational . -It is for an Analytical research paper -This outline is important since I have to split the work up into 4 people.... - CAN SOMEONE HELP ME EDIT?FIX IT .... This is an outline that has been graded and turned in already ... I need to fix it because this outline will guide us on doing out paper ... SHE ALSO SAID THAT THERE IS TOO MUCH OVER LAP BETWEEN c. investment schemes and a. avoiding out valuable personal info.outline..... i really need help ... Thanxs so much

Public Comments

  1. your pitcher is looking good
  2. The number one source of information for identity theft is lost and stolen wallets. Don't spend all your paper concentrating on the internet when that is more hype than reality.
  3. A problem is your "Thesis". Your paper should address a central research question, and your thesis should express a reasonable answer to that question. For instance, regarding your topic, a typical research question can be: "How can identity theft be prevented by consumers, organizations and anti-fraud agencies?". Your thesis or problem can be: "Research shows that identify theft are prevented by incorporating anti-fraud laws, educating online consumers and updating website securities. However, several issues are still unresolved: (1) Are anti-fraud laws effective? (2) Are online consumers responsive when they are being educated? (3) Are there any growth and improvements in online securities?" Those were just examples. Read through your book and find out more about research problems and thesis. On the other hand, if you want custom help, visit www.mywritingassistant.com.
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